A really good article from Forbes – click here for more.
Excerpt: “If you write your LinkedIn profile in the language I call Corporate Speak Zombie language, you’re going to sound like every other battle drone in the Empire’s battalion. You won’t sound like yourself.”
I don’t agree with all the examples – for instance, I wouldn’t say “Working Under Amy, I learned…” but she’s on the right track.
The examples given here represent positions that are lower than those held by most readers of this blog, so you’d have to modify. But the idea is here.